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Monica A Leyva's avatar

Cynthia, Your ability to braid innocence with devastation here is remarkable. The tonal progression from playful folklore into generational grief felt seamless, almost mythic in cadence. I especially admired how Love remained gentle without becoming simplistic. The piece understands that enduring kindness often emerges from proximity to suffering rather than distance from it.

“Every hope also has bled tears” is an extraordinary line.

Beautiful work,

Monica

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What a beautiful, hopeful piece, Cynthia. Love to see you writing some prose again too.

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